So originally I wanted to give my all in the editing to make it as readable as possible since the first 4 chapters where done good but as usual i didn`t met that goal. About halfway through editing I lost the motivation and end up doing a back up series, a back up series is a novel I normally translate when I get tired of translating something.
So I decided that I will just make two posts for each chapter. The first one would be the unedited one that shows the parts that I am not getting and the last one would be edited one that should be close to perfect for a mtl. Hopefully when i have the vibes to edit I will go back through and bring the hard ones that wasn`t answered to the NU translator section and see if i can get some answers.
As usual to new or old visitors who have time you can point out possible corrections to sentences that sounds weird or point out words/ sentences that I interpreted incorrectly. Thanks in advance.
Also here is the google doc link if you want to comment there
“That was helpful, Yuki-ane! “
I called out to my elder sister who was walking beside me, while holding a shopping bag that was filled to the brim.
Eguchi Yuki, a 3rd year highschool student of White lily academy wears her long hair in a ponytail, a feature of the prideful older sister, is her eyes that seem to be strong willed due to its neutralness. The large blue ribbon suites her dignified face quite well. She had a caring personality where she loves to help others with one thing or another, serving as both the chief of the archery club and the president of the student council, according to Nana-san, it seems she is the older sister of the school.
Yesterday, the exchange of email address was done with Nana-san, and I who had obtained the promise of a date had realized a certain thing upon returning home. I didn’t particularly have any clothes that could be used to go on a date with a young girl….
Therefore, I jumped into a dogeza before Yuki-ani, and that’s how she became my adviser who picks clothes.
“But…is it true that, you are serious about Nana-san? “
“I wouldn’t beg for a lie, that’s right, doesn’t Yuki-ane have a person she likes?”
“…Why, do you assume there is no boyfriend?”
“So you don’t have one then?”
“Noisy!….Wait here, baka! “
As a result of getting Yuki-ani angry she went towards the powder room, now should i do something with the capsule toy.
The upper limit of 600 yen was smashed yesterday but, for today it’s all right. Pochitto!
[N Trading Card]
Set card repeatedly- trades at random in cards of the same rank.
[N Wheel of Fortune]
Set on smartphone- fate rotates by a random roulette.
[ N Stand up for a while]
Set and attach it to target- keeps standing at a spot for three minutes.
[N constant paper]
Set and attach it to target, the other party will always take out paper in janken (rock paper scissors)
Set and hoist summons a weapon, with this fake legendary weapon your a hero!.
[S Red Rose]
Exclusive use for elder sister- set and attach it to target- improves charm.
The red rose has a dazzling effect at the moment of greeting towards young girls behind the scenes.*
Can an ordinary person even use the fake legendary weapon [Gilgamesh]? Perhaps it’s it better than a hero who eradicates the demon lord with a wooden rod for 10G….. [Constant paper] is something I don’t really need, pass! [Stand up for a while] can be used for a prank……
I will use the [Red Rose] silver card on Yuki-ani… As it would be disappointment not being able to see her wear the red rose. *
Lets use the trading card on [Brood parasitism of an Common Cuckoo]. I have an interest for the word ‘brood parasitism’ but, this cards requires courage. Let’s see if I can try trading for a different gold card. Ei!*
[G Cupid’s Love Crossbow]
Exclusive use for women- set photo- Inapplicable to the contractor- Supports a young lady to fall in love.*
Guha…..I did something stupid….. Something like another person’s love is not worth worrying about , damnit! Such a ending can’t be helped, next…next! Although the wheel of fortune is a smelly trap, should i try and see? When the [Wheel fortune] card is attached to smartphone!
Oh, something had come out on the smartphone screen.
[Blue is money, Yellow is a wonderful card, and Red is debt. Start]*
Cho, stop on something other than minus~! The roulette on the screen started to revolve on its own.
The red is dangerouss, as there is a good probability even though its scarce. It’s about 1/4…..the roulette revolves like a pie chart, the colour that it stays upon is likely the hit. The speed becomes slow, OI! It seems to have stopped on red. Eek! *
アブねー黄色に止まって良かったわ……なんて安心してたらカードが物凄い勢いで発射され、俺の股間に直撃……涙目でのたうち回る事になった。スマホを見れば魔術師がケタケタ笑って「ざまあ！」とコメントを残し、消えていった。スマホの制作者の悪戯かよ！ クソ婆さんの弟子だけあって、超むかつく！(What does アブねー mean)
It was great that it stopped on the yellow colour abu~nee….after feeling somewhat relieved, the card is discharged with a earth-shattering force, directly hitting my groin….. As a result I writhe in pain with teary eyes. When looking at the screen that magician smiled, laughing foolishly leaving with the comment “zamaa” and disappears. Isn’t this smartphone a product of that mischievous person! There is only that damn old woman`s discipline, I feel very irritated!**
[R Eye Doll]
Exclusive use for women- set photo- set a password- the targeted person will become your personal doll.
Uh-oh, a rare card came! It’s a wonderful card! Let’s keep it careful.
“What is it? Did you make that noise? “
“Ah, it’s nothing”
Since Yuki-ane had returned, I took up the bags to leave the mall.Naturally, I placed the Red Rose card on Yuki-ane!*
“The said cafe is?”*
“Its close by, they specialize in cakes and black tea contains herbs. “
“Fuh, since its Sei treat”
“It’s alright I wouldn’t call it anything special, look it’s over there.”
I pointed at an famous store hidden within the residential area at the back of the mall, I also learned of this place from the student council president who I am indebted to. Because cake set are super effective on high school girls, especially for Yuki-ane.
三角屋根で白い屋根のお菓子みたいな店の中に入ると、結構、混んでる。この店に来たのは初めてなんだが、雰囲気も良くていい店だ。実は、奈菜さんとのデートコースの下見も兼ねている。男一人じゃ入りにくい店だしな。(Am not getting the first line)
It appeared to be very crowded when I entered the store that resembles a white roof of candy with a triangular roof. Although this is the first time I had come to this store, the store even has a good atmosphere. In fact, it also serves a rehearsal of the dates course with Nana-san. At this store one guy cannot enter easily.**
When we sat down after being guided to a back seat by the clerk-san, I ordered a coffee while Yuki-ane had ordered a cake set.*
“Hee, this store isn’t so bad. This is a good performance on your part.”*
Yuki-ane is usually expressionless but, when she is in good mood it’s kind of easy to understand, because her eyes shine. It seems she was pleased with this as a thanks for selection of clothes. *
“Excuse me, visitors, would you mind sharing your table.?”
Because the clerk-san had come to ask, when looking around most of the seats were crowded. Ah, it seems it’s their busy period, so we decided to consent willingly, but that guest.*
“Ah, chaasu! President!”*
“Eh” Yuki-ane looks at me surprised.
“Ohh~! Sei, I didn’t expect to meet you in such a place. Did you come immediately? This is? “
When the president saw Yuki-ane he made a seemly strange face.
“Nice to meet you. Hiya, Yuki the older sister. Thanks for looking after my younger brother.”*
Yuki-ane had bitten her tongue. Thats unusual. Hmm? The face of Yuki-ane… is blushing…..and is looking down modestly. Its as if a young girl fell in love, no way…..*
Well, as for my senior Shuichi shinjo who is also known as chairman is an Ikemen, filthy rich, athletic, handsome, with superior grades, nonetheless with an model’s figure, he also has a good personality and is perfect superhero that is without fault, therefore it can’t be helped that Yuki-ane would fall in love. Besides Yuki-ane had lived a very sheltered life in White Lily academy, therefore she doesn’t have any immunity towards men. **
“Your too polite. It is I who should say so, as I was saved thanks to Sei offering his assistance with various things. That the student council president-san of White Lily was Sei`s older sister… ”
“Its because we don’t look a like. And because it was elder sister’s recommendation that we came here. “
Pfft, even i can read this mood! Because this store was a introduction of chairman,i will cover it up.*
“Is that so. Black tea please. “
The chairman had easily let my covering pass by making the latter half of his words towards the store clerk. Is the appeal for failure so difficult. Hmm, one way or another I want to make use of that card. Yuki-ane was being nervous as her body was tense and her face was bright red, being obedient like a borrowed cat. Now, I think am certain.*
While working out a strategy I gave suitable responses to the chairman’s conversation. The chairman then successfully shifts the conversation, even casually bring up the topic to Yuki-ane, as one would expect of the indescribable style of a host. It will be impossible for me even if 100 years pass. Bringing up the subject of Yuki-ane, with her face already bright red, due to a small panic she had bitten her tongue a lot. What a cute creature this is.!?*
“By the way Chairman, a consult for a second?”*
“Hmm? Thats unusually… Sei wants a consult.”*
With the reason of a consult I invite the chairman to the toilet, while casually taking a photo of Yuki-ane. Before reaching the restroom the “hold a bucket while standing ” card is attached on the retreating figure of the chairman. Confirming that the chairman is standing rock stiff due to the effect of the card, i immediately set the “love cupid crossbow” card.*
やっぱりか！ カードをセットした瞬間、両手持ちのボーガンが光と共に姿を現す。絶対そうだと思ったよ！ こんなの持って学校で会長を待ち伏せとか出来ないもんな。普通に通報されるレベルだ。(not getting the last line)
Yapparika! The instant the card is set, a crossbow in my hand appears together with a light. I thought it was seemly absolute! Holding such a thing it will not be possible to ambush the chairman at school among other things. The level is usually informed of.**
With a width of 80cm and length of 1 m, I release the “cupid arrow” shooting from behind the chairman at an impossible distance of 0. When the arrow is lodged and drawn, because once the arrow is at a dangerous level, it’s launched towards the right shoulder of the chairman!**
The arrow vanishes like it’s absorbed into the Chairman. Mission Complete !
The “The cupid crossbow” also disappeared as it vanishes from my hands. After only waiting for about 2 minutes.
“Ough… hmm? I….”
As the effectiveness of the card wears off, I hurriedly swindled the chairman who wore an question mark.*
” What’s the matter? I was surprised as you blanked out suddenly. “*
“Hmm? Suddenly something no… no, yes, what is it you wanted consultant on?”**
“Ah, my elder sister has a fear of strangers and is not used to boys due to being brought up in White Lily academy. “
” Ah, is that so? Certainly at the previous meeting there was such a appearance . “**
Are you serious! I was surprised at the chairman who agreed! I am 120% certain that the chairman is the person Yuki-ane likes.
“Since that’s the case, because I decided to return on urgent business, I want to request escort of elder sister to chairman.”**
” As in me? “**
” Yes, if its chairman I will feel assured. “
” If I am good enough I will be responsible. It’s also the request of a junior.”**
よっしゃ！ どうよ？ 俺の恋のキューピットぶりは！ あっと雪姉を待たしてるから早く戻らないとな。
Alright! How about that? My style of cupid love! Yuki-ane who is waiting will be surprised if I don’t come back quickly.**
When I returned to my seat following after the chairman, Yuki-ane was seated even eating her cake set with good manners. I got Yuki-ane attention by pouring the coffee that was placed on the table. I guess I who is an nuisance should disappear quickly.*
“Yuki-ane, I am sorry, I have some urgent business.”
“Since I requested for Chairman to be my substitute, I am going ahead.”
Placing a 2000 note on top of the table, and then holding the shopping bags in both hands, ignoring the clingy like eyes of Yuki-ane, while waving at two of them, I leave the store. When leaving from the store, with a glance you can see two persons from the window but, yes, it seems alright. Even the card can be used like this! I did a good thing.!
After doing a good thing I felt good. With a mixed humming I pass through the department store, walking towards the shopping district. After walking for awhile I unexpectedly met the worst person at the entrance of the shopping district.
It was Fujikawa Aoi who rushed over while waving her hand, she is a childhood friend at her second year at White Lily Academy. Due to her grandma being Russian, her long hair had a pale soft wavy pigment, her blue eyes appear gray and has a trademark white headband. She is a matchless beautiful girl who resembles to the figure of western people`s cute lips with a tall nose on a pure white skin with even long eyelashes. A pink camisole dress that highlights her well developed body clearly. Once, she was unfortunately my first love.**
Her family owns a family restaurant nearby, where Aoi helps out by being a waiter. If you hear up to this, you may assume that Aoi is good dutiful daughter but that’s a big mistake! This person knows that herself is beautiful so she serves the students of the all boy’s school with an suggestive attitude, she is a demon like woman who misleads boys with “I have a boyfriend” pushing it on me.**
It begins by a man turning into yandere to kill, I said with rattling teeth due to the surprise attack by a strange man, because when you’re associated with Aoi nothing good will happen. If Mai is a troublemaker then Aoi is a demon, I think only doing the greeting and then going my own way would be nice.***
“Well its been a long time”*
“Saying that towards your childhood sweetheart is cruel~. “*
” I don’t want to be attacked by a knife. “*
“Hmm, but that was not me, does even Sei goes to the shopping district lottery? “
“Did you not receive the coupon at the department store over there?”
“Ah~ i got about 6 of them”
「じゃあ、１枚分けてよ、５枚で１回なんだ」(I dont get it)
“Then…share 1,so after 1 it will be about 5″**
“Thank you, I love you Sei”
When the coupon is handed over Aoi makes a wink and takes my hand towards the lottery place. Because her expression can change unlike Yuki-ane, its charming. Naturally all the boys are cheated due to this.
“Which reminds me, are you going out with her.”
“Guwa, who is that! “
“Has it not been decided by Yuki-ane. Is it really Nana-chan?”**
“You, know Nana-chan? “
“Yeah, were classmates!”
Guwa, my secret is known by the worst person. There is no doubt that I will be teased now. I was an idiot for forgetting that if I talked with Yuki-ane she would tell Aoi.
” Hey, did you say anything strange to Nana-san.
” You will understand! It’s been awhile since I went to that place at night.”*
“……Do as you like”
Ahh, for my weakness to be gripped by Aoi is the worst… Nn! Wait, I can use the “eye doll” on this person! If it’s this person I know i wouldn’t feel guilt!*
Standing in the line at the lottery place there is two people including Aoi and seeing the chance I took a photo. Because the shutter sound was not heard Aoi seems to not have noticed it. I will call her tonight!*
Then, handing over the 5 gift certificate to the uncle in the shopping district, the standard lottery is pulled, revolving around. Aoi comes out receiving a tissue. As for the lucky me.*
“Congratulation! The big prize of a first class hot spring trip!”
Oh! My real luck seemed to have exploded out. However, as for Nana-san a one night trip is impossible due to the concerns of her family.**
“Hooray, Sei, do you want to go with me? Aoi draws close to me jokingly but.”*
“Baka, travel huh. I will even hand it over to your old man”*
“Tsk, you’re boring”
“Being boring is ok”*
In the end I who had received the complimentary ticket had end up returning home together until reaching home where I was able to shake Aoi off. Moreover…the real overbearing person had come again at 7 o`clock!**
After that, in the evening, Yuki-ane had returned home excited. I am told that she had decided to go out with the Chairman. It works already, the amazing power to change, I though. But, I didn’t think I would hear Yuki-ane earnestly speaking about her love affair until dinner ended……Nevertheless a person talking about their love affair is annoying! If its the matter of the Chairman, even I know alreaady, nee-chan……**
End of chapter
When the author said “At this store one guy cannot enter easily” do you thing he means single guys can`t come in or single guys will feel embarrassed so they avoid a place full of girls. Cause how can the Chairman get in, case he should be by his self.